Maina

3/3/11 MY STORY

HI, everyone my name is Maina.I was born in Bhutan.When i was small i left my country due to the political war.And then my parents and i came to Nepal and we stayed in a Refugee camp for eighteen years.My country Bhutan is landlock country and is covered on all sides with beautyful moutains.I speak theree languages nepali, hindi and english.Actually i know speak in hindi and nepali, but english is my third language.My nationality is Nepali.

When we lived in a Refugee camp we struggled for basice needs.In Nepal i passed class 12.On 21st May 2009 my parents and i came to Queensland.When i came to Austraila i was very excited because I saw the different environment.First i lived with my parents in Cairns for nine months.Cairns is a beautyful place but there is too much humidity.I don't like hot weather. I like moderate types of climate.In 2010 I migrated to Tasmaina in Hobart. I liked Hobart weather very much.I came to Hobart and got married last year.My husband is an outreach support worker in Glenview.He is workig part time.I am very happy with my husband.He is helpful and he loves me very much.I have been in Austraila eighteen months.

At last I am studying at the Polytechnic in Tasmaina in English level 2. last year i did the work itout course. My work experience was in childcare.I am very happy to study at the Polytechnic because i want to improve my English.This year i will not countiouny my study because my baby is arriving this mounth.In future i will study more english and do the aged care course and help people in the community.I liked the Polytechnic teachers and my class mates who are very frank.I live in New town one bedroom unit. In this way i end my short story.

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We will all be thinking of you with the birth of your baby this month. You were so keen to come to school this year and I look forward to seeing you soon. All the best, Take care, Suzanne