Thaw+Ray

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My name is Thaw. I came from Burma. My nationality is Karen so I speak Karen. I can speak Burma but I don't want to speak Burma. I want to tell you about my family in Burma. When I was a child I lived with my sister, parents and brother. I have one sister and four brothers. My parents are **farmer**.They worked on the farm from Monday to Saturday. When I was five years old I went to school with my sister and brother. We lived in the village. My house was next to the school. My father built a house out of bamboo. After my village school I went to school in the city. When I went to school I lived in my grandmother's house. Every day I walked to school for one hour. After school I walked back to home. I had a bath and dinner. After that I did my home work. In December I went to visit my family in the village for a holiday. When I studied we needed lots of money. I went to the refugee camp for more study. I married seven years ago. I have one child. He's going to kidder three **da**y a week. I have been in Hobart 23 months. I am very happy living in Tasmania. I like the **weathe**. I have studied English at the Polytechnic for 12 months. I live in New Town next to Kmart. I live in a unit. I have one bedroom and one bath. I have lived in my unit for seven months. I have a small **gander,** a big tree and some flowers. Now I haven't seen my family for 9 years. I am very sad I want to see my family very much.

17/3/11 Hi Thaw Ray, Well done with your story. You have spent a good deal of time on it. I enjoyed reading your autobiography. Can you please correct these words? weather garden

Plurals: they are farmer**s** three day**s** a week
 * Suzanne**